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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-12-30 10:26 PM






The Night ... Before Last

December brilliance
Night sky gleaming in star’s light
Poets are rhyming,
Shining, dreaming, gleaming songs
Ev'rything is right


© Karilea Rilling Jungel
December 30, 2005

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Jeep Monkey
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1 posted 2005-12-30 10:30 PM


As perfect as swinging in a hammock on Pawley's Island with the gentle sea breeze blowing - as you sip iced tea in the shade of the old oak trees.

Just as it should be.  I like your write!

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-12-30 10:35 PM



Thank you, Poet.  Our friends here shine
as bright with their poetry as any star...

and I am looking forward to calling you
one of those stars, very soon.


shades of paul
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3 posted 2005-12-30 10:38 PM


This poem shines,just like the pic..Paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Martie
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4 posted 2005-12-30 11:04 PM


Sissie

It's cloudy here...expecting big storm for the Rose Parade...but still the night is beautiful as are your words!  

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2005-12-30 11:07 PM


the winter sky
is radiant
her stars,
polished in
the night, so clear
the poet's pen
reveals these gems

iliana
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6 posted 2005-12-31 12:48 PM


Oh yeah!  Love it, Sunshiney SIL!  Happy New Year -- may it be one of wonderful surprises!   .....jo
Munda
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7 posted 2005-12-31 02:12 PM


Awesome! Picture AND poem! Happy New Year!
kayjay
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8 posted 2005-12-31 03:39 PM


"Poets are rhyming,
Shining, dreaming, gleaming songs"

Leave it to you, Karilea, to get us to write, write, write!  

Happy New Year  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

lucky
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9 posted 2005-12-31 05:17 PM


been foggy and snowing here but you know we love that. But I do know that Martie's stars and Margie's moon and your sunshine are behind the flakes falling here.

best wishes, Dale & Rosemary



Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

[This message has been edited by lucky (01-01-2006 10:28 PM).]

froggy
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10 posted 2005-12-31 06:57 PM


Love it Karilea.
Happy New Year

SmartChick
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11 posted 2005-12-31 07:58 PM


Oh I like this. happy New Year, my friend.
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12 posted 2005-12-31 10:55 PM


Sunshine,
  
  So true!  What a sweet gift you leave us in 2005.  Shine on!

misce

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