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Open Poetry #36

Inbetween the beautiful

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2005-12-30 07:15 PM

INBETWEEN THE BEAUTIFUL

It could be the last
Soon..
It could all be past
All..
That is beautiful
Is..
More beautiful
Because..
Of just that
We..
All die
After all..
What is life without
Death..
Breathing down our necks
..

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-12-30 08:51 PM

Very true...very deep.
Nice write.

JL

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2005-12-30 09:51 PM

Very meaningful. I love the structure. Very well written.

Jeep Monkey
Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 96
Chaos

3 posted 2005-12-30 09:56 PM

Hmmm.

Deep, indeed. "Death breathing down our necks". Is that what that is? This restlessness that makes us keep on ticking? Faster, faster.....less sleep.

Interesting write. Enjoyed.

JM

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