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DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
Posts 82
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2005-12-30 01:11 PM


Change

Subtle feelings,
torn from the wall,
brief ellipses of emotion,
beg to be shown,
I've become indifferent
to feeling,
longing for the golden days,
when I wasn't this way.

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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2005-12-30 01:15 PM


'Change is inevitable.'  
This is a great write.  Enjoyed the reflection.

JL



nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-12-30 01:28 PM


I have known that feeling several times over the last five years...it will go away eventually~~

M

Jeep Monkey
Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96
Chaos
3 posted 2005-12-31 12:04 PM


Change is inevitable.
And tomorrow you will feel differently.
Emotions expressed well here.

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