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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-30 07:00 AM



discovering you
is tiptoeing
down
the seams of a swallow
like cool water
barefoot
to a sahara
with reasoning

you are night
as a woman
in gauzless gowns
of beguiling wind
only your whispers
strum

enchanted cellos
of hemlock
for the soul
whose eyes
can never close
to dream
_____________
daark



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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-12-30 09:52 AM


"enchanted cellos
of hemlock "

Now why did this remind me of angel trumpets?

tsk...you should never go unread, DS.

Talk purty to me.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-12-30 04:00 PM


Mmmm....yes..lovely.
Hugs~E

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-12-30 04:56 PM


Dark~

*smiling* at your lovely Friday offering~

'discovering you
is tiptoeing
down
the seams of a swallow
like cool water
barefoot
to a sahara
with reasoning

you are night
as a woman
in gauzless gowns
of beguiling wind
only your whispers
strum'


Ahhhhh ... so beautifully you drape the deep scarlet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -           noles1@totcon.com     

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-12-30 04:58 PM


ahhh...
beautiful read Dark.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-12-30 05:14 PM



Dip,

twirl...

repeat.



Excellent!


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