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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
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0 posted 2005-12-29 10:15 PM



No end
No beginning
No rhyme
And no reason
You caught my
senses off guard
Why do you act
as if you are unaware
You hide
Behind the edge
of my dreams
I don't think
this is love
Don't think it
will ever make perfect sense
Deja Vu
Scattered
Sharp to the touch
Dull to the taste
Taste buds
thirsty for more
Weird static
frequency
touch and go
Why are you so far away
Your aura
A perfect balance
to my chaotic
fickle
thoughts
You drown me
Plunge me deeper
I can't swim
Don't know how to
breathe
My intuition
gasping
Bombarded
When I touch your voice
This can't be
Love
Not allowed
to make perfect sense
My sanity hungry
for answers
craving
an explanation
Sometimes
My soul grows anxious
I don't want
to think about you
If this is only in vain
I don't want
these feelings
if you turn out
to be nobody
If you are just
another
fleeting fantasy
I crave your attention
Shrinking always
beneath our conversations
Falling victim
to the space in between
You're not allowed to be real
It'd make it easier
Just in case
Since I've fallen victim
to the weird static frequency....


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-12-29 10:19 PM



Kristen?

I find a lot of me in here...

continue to live
and write, and write, and write....




Nightshade
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2005-12-29 11:19 PM


This gave me chills. Memories perhaps.
Wonderful write. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2005-12-29 11:51 PM


*smiling here*

cuz I know what you mean . . .
and half of it sounds like my life . . .


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