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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-12-28 03:46 PM



"It's nothing..." She tells
me.

And I believe her.

Even as I hold her in
my arms.

Believing in everything as
well.


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1 posted 2005-12-28 03:58 PM


I suppose that in one way at looking at nothing, there can be everything. Hmm, profound thought that be. I do not know if this is where you were going with the poem, but I do enjoy the kiss of your pen!


Linda

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2 posted 2005-12-28 04:15 PM


Ericc

What a interesting way of seeing words and their meaning...I really enjoyed this!!

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3 posted 2005-12-28 04:26 PM


Eric, a poignant moment captured...left to be interpreted in several ways.
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4 posted 2005-12-28 04:51 PM


i have been there my friend
peace to you ~jw

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5 posted 2005-12-28 05:37 PM


simplistic, yet with much depth held within-

thank you - SB

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6 posted 2005-12-28 05:49 PM


Devotion, trust and love....a wonderful
cocktail of what can make an excellent
relationship....

You pen well Sir Eric........

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7 posted 2005-12-28 09:54 PM



Why do I always
want to argue
that sometimes
the nothing
is more than
any something
that ever was?


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8 posted 2005-12-28 10:07 PM


Eric,

Again, I smile at how you take a few words and write so much.  I enjoy your word play.

              miscellanea

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9 posted 2005-12-28 11:33 PM


And that is what she wishes - that everything is well.  So that you believe that is, in a way, making her plight stronger.

'Tis better to believe all is well, than not.

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10 posted 2005-12-29 02:45 AM


I think women are inclined to say "it's nothing" when, in fact, it is something but another's belief that everything is well is a strong calming influence but only, of course, when attuned to one another. You write so well of life and relationships.
Ericc
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11 posted 2005-12-29 08:06 AM


The Buddhist Heart Sutra tells us that form is emptiness, emptiness form. Quantum Physics has a similiar sutra of wave/particle.
My teacher in this poem, manages to alter my view of reality with only a few words...and of course her constant love. Indeed at once everything is nothing/everything, spirit/flesh. In the end duality is let go...if only for a moment.

Love,
Eric

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12 posted 2006-01-03 07:35 AM


Out of nothing I feel the wave of everything washing over me ...

Such intense moments of KNOWING.

I love you.
Margherita

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13 posted 2006-01-04 01:37 AM


My teacher in this poem, manages to alter my view of reality with only a few words...and of course her constant love. Indeed at once everything is nothing/everything, spirit/flesh. In the end duality is let go...if only for a moment.

Eric, I understand this so well. It is
what my Love and I have.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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14 posted 2006-01-04 02:54 AM


I've missed reading your "moments."  Enjoyed this.  Best to you for the new year!   ....jo
Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2006-01-04 09:50 AM




it's everything.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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16 posted 2006-01-04 05:07 PM


twin souls . . .
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