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Kazm
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since 2003-11-13
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0 posted 2005-12-28 01:55 PM



"They had Christmas
early this year"

it is bad news
always bad
when the happiness
comes too soon

this year

this year will be different
this year good
for us

and we know
Christmas will be

late

                                                 Kaz

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1 posted 2005-12-28 02:10 PM


Your poem gives me hope. *S* Christmas was hard for me this year... something to endure, not enjoy. So I like the thought of a late one... such a celebration should be a time of heart, not merely a date on the calendar. *S*

Whenever your Christmas comes, I wish you happiness... This is beautiful!


Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
2 posted 2005-12-28 07:35 PM



I like the mystery of this

John

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