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Second Story |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It has always been there Beneath the vespers of feelings Swept into glitter where I dance Dispersed freely, raining unto myself These are the whispers inside The breeze that I carry and that carries me Winter changes her shape, thickening Still, the curve of horizons remain defined It has always been there Layers upon layers of fine silt Protection from the cold that may come Or a fall that may leave broken branches To articulate the veins of a wild river Requires the dam and spill of such intensity As to drive a man blind in a heartbeat strike But the churn of emotions drives forth my sails As I fear what I cannot control or steady It has always been there Just a first or second story In the flow of my own mind Copyright Kkh 12/28/05 |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful write. Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A wee parsec off the old TD path....but I do like it very much...Well done dearest friend...ya dun goood! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...How beautiful this is!!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen? The best way to read your poetry is to speak aloud your poetry... Swept into glitter where I dance ... Winter changes her shape, thickening ... It has always been there Layers upon layers of fine silt Magnifique! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
beautiful i agree with the others this was very nice td : ) ~JW |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I love how you described yourself. I appreciate what Sunshine says. I almost always read your poetic compositions aloud! miscellanea |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Enjoyed your play on words and the flow it gave me. |
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Kal525 Junior Member
since 2005-12-20
Posts 26 |
You used some very nice imagery, yet didn't plug too much of it in, so the poem flowed very nicely. |
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