Open Poetry #36 |
Heike |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Ah when horses Thundered into the courtyard And drums resounded Off autumn colored hills Speak truth old man Did your heart not feel It’s tiger blood In that moment Were you not unafraid Now the years With their wear upon our hours Make us fearful of the stars Yet do recall When comes the end How you and I when we were young Bearded the monster in its lair [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (12-27-2005 08:26 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah! I like this......Great evocative images that speake volumes. Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This makes me wish I had hair on me chest. thump-thump-thump You express the heart of warriors. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
or, this is the man. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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