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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-12-20 09:02 PM



Sleep well
My love

Here
No one can touch you

No ugly
Boggy man
Can come here to hurt you

And I will stand guard
Over your solitude
While you recover why

You choose still
To be alive
Despite the absence of God


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-22 11:21 PM


brrr, reads more cold and chilling than angry

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2 posted 2005-12-28 09:33 AM


This does chill... but it also warms... a caring guard can hasten recovery... even when physically miles away.
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2005-12-28 10:20 AM


Can't put my finger on why I like this so much but I do..

There is something in it that reads me...but yet eludes me.

a readers perspective I suppose.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-12-28 07:01 PM


i feel the bite here
Huan Yi
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5 posted 2005-12-28 07:10 PM



Thank you all for reading

The title refers to the sudden mood
in which this was written after reading something
which, for me, lends weight to the suspicion
that too many write and speak from the safe
side of the screen.

Thanks again for reading.

John

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-05-01 03:17 PM


good anger! and shut the curtain.

nice to read your anger though I have a taste of it before. or after? can't figure out.

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