Open Poetry #36 |
Anger |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Sleep well My love Here No one can touch you No ugly Boggy man Can come here to hurt you And I will stand guard Over your solitude While you recover why You choose still To be alive Despite the absence of God |
||
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved | |||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
brrr, reads more cold and chilling than angry |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This does chill... but it also warms... a caring guard can hasten recovery... even when physically miles away. |
||
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Can't put my finger on why I like this so much but I do.. There is something in it that reads me...but yet eludes me. a readers perspective I suppose. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
||
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i feel the bite here |
||
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you all for reading The title refers to the sudden mood in which this was written after reading something which, for me, lends weight to the suspicion that too many write and speak from the safe side of the screen. Thanks again for reading. John |
||
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
good anger! and shut the curtain. nice to read your anger though I have a taste of it before. or after? can't figure out. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |