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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-27 07:22 AM


the winds will come to motor town
with fire there will be moaning
the voice of the prayer skins
will be loud on the mornings

and lower down her watery agony
the gas lights will melt to blood
when the shaking of bones
gives permission to the demons

the angels will know a city of war
where even the stones bleed
and the years of seven will worry
but there will be a returning

the walkers of intercession
will blister their hooves on sand
they will lose the color of their hands
from the folding of fingers

without the son of the sun's blessing

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-12-27 08:37 AM


Isn't there a thousand years?

I get confused..

a thousand years to you is but a day to me...or words to that effect..

anyway..there I go making assumptions from what I read in it..

Thanks for making me think Mr. D.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2005-12-27 08:42 AM


susieC..
yes I think you are correct in that..this is more of a current 7 years thing ..a purging..perhaps..

we will see..
thanks for the eyes lady friend

ManOfWolves28
Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83

3 posted 2005-12-28 03:16 PM


Thought that cup of coffee got the best of me after reading this one. Reminds me of a poem I started which personifies a big semi truck.

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....

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