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darkrosexzx
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since 2005-12-27
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0 posted 2005-12-27 05:46 AM



No where to run no where to hide all
you care about is what others think
why can't you see why can't i say
because im in to deep because i have
to think of others to i can't be
a rat i just don't have it in me
so i wouldn't say anything i'll
live my life not saying a word because
you'll never see you binded by light
so you can't see the dark
oh how i pray you'll see but i wish you
wouldn't.

This poem is about drugs

© Copyright 2005 darkrosexzx - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-12-27 12:43 PM


Hey! Welcome to Pip!

Sometimes it's hard to watch others destroy themselves and not say something..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
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2 posted 2005-12-28 12:09 PM


Welcome to Passions and your poem takes on a very controversial subject these days.  It is horrible watching someone literally destroy themselves on drugs, and your poem hits that message hard home.

Carpe' Diem

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2005-12-28 05:52 AM


Welcome to Passions....Yeah it's hard to watch...Seems like the person has to want to help themself but that still doesn't make it any easier.

Eric

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