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ChemicalRepose
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since 2004-03-28
Posts 102
0 posted 2005-12-25 01:26 AM

Another silent moment,
I'm forced to savor.
Feel the embers within my soul,
I have been sabotaged, here,
lying deep within this hole.

Solitude has stole my sanity,
continues to beat me,
and I'm beginning to feel weary.
Intrigued by the unknown,
I stagger forward,
and subside like the sediment,
along the lakeside.

I'm sinking, calm, and feel bliss.
as I drown into this somber fissure.
Destiny has separated, broke,
and formed this crevice.
suffocating fast, like the scurrying Levant's.
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Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29
Posts 326
Wandering
1 posted 2005-12-26 06:18 PM

It seems as though you read my mind.

Well done.

Thank you for sharing.

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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-12-27 12:38 PM

Excellent vision portrayal

dave
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