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My story |
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Phoenix-reborn New Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 3canada |
This is the story of someone i used to know a pretty little girl with dreams of her own she was always so happy showing her crooked smile but i haven't seen her in quite a while she and her sister were taken from their mother it was so long ago she doesn't even remember her. for the first few years of her fragile little life she was pretty happy (even after being attacked with a knife!) but then once again they were taken away from the home they grew to love (she still wishes she could have stayed!) so new family, new home and she quickly adjusted away from all she had known things were okay they were actually happy but then they found out some stuff about their family like an abusive brother who'd hurt them for not doing his chores and psychotic parents who hit them some more eventually the parents they just had enough and sent away her sister the only one she really loved ever since then the little girl was torn apart from growing to love people and then haviong them ripped from her heart she grew angry and started acting out she kept her distance to try and save her heart there were days she showed up at school with bruises everywhere she felt like such a fool everyone knew what must have went on because it was so obvious but still they moved on no one could help this little girl who just wanted love and to be safe in this world now shes grown up and totally changed now i'm wondering if she could have been saved i miss the little girl who grew up before her time seeing as her story is exactly the same as mine cuz i am her and she is me and there's nothing else that could ever be. so once again i got hurt again i took down the wall but now ill build it up again so heres my story, at least a shortened version and i hope you wont think that im a bad person cuz i lie and sometimes steal and love to get my way i pretend i don't feel the pain that wont go away so please dont pretend that you really like me cuz i'm not that fragile i'm not exactly what you see i hide myself inside so no one can see no one can hurt the part thats really me so thats it for now you can say what you like cuz what you may see may not be whats right this is the story of a girl i used to know a sad little girl with broken dreams of her own. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Welcome to PIP! This is a great poem. We all look forward to seeing more of your work. Also, be sure to check you e-mail for a special greeting. Cheers! -majnu |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions enjoy yourself here hugs, Chris  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome, Phoenix-reborn. I enjoyed your poem...but felt sorry that the little girl/you had such a difficult time. I'm glad you are writing poetry, it can help heal the places that are still sore within your heart.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Pip. I hope your time here among new friends who nurture and support will help in your healing. I am looking forward to reading more from you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passion's. Your initial post is a real heart-grabber, a story no one should have to know first hand. Dreams have a way of re-surfacing, and I'm hoping that your finest dreams shall return.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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