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Dear Santa.....
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Dear Santa..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Dear Santa, I ask for too much sometimes, it’s true but this Christmas I have a favor I need to ask of you It’s not about gifts placed under the tree this year I want the words to let him know how much he means to me elocution of eloquence in delicate detail of my heart’s devotion palpable presentation an intimate expression of my truest emotion so that he may understand I know, sometimes I want excessively but all I really need Santa is his love forever here, with me ~SEA~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww Susan, I am sure Santa will do his best. Such a sweet write. hugs, Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
so much love hugs ~wolfie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hope you get that wish, SEA! Enjoyed the write.  .....jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Something tells me his love is there to stay forever and even one more day |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
aww Susan, this is beautiful . . . Do not doubt . . . you are a beautiful spirit. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm certain, your poetic heart and soul will most undenialbly articulate these feelings to him very very well (winkies atcha) and many thanks for a lovely poem |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
So adorable! you made me smile. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm sure he already knows of your love and devotion. Beautiful write Sue! Hugs~Nancy ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Santa is an old softie.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not only is it seen in your elocution, m'friend... but in your eyes, as well... . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSEA~ Girlie girl ... your Christmas letter will be answered ... and his eyes will light up, even more than they already do~ Merry Christmas sweetie~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you're too cute. grins |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A Christmas wish sure to make even Santa swoon!   May your Christmas be a merry one! EA |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
How sweet this is, I think we all would like that wish with our own special someone. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much for your kind replies...you guys make me smile.... &  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
You may have written it for him in this poem...  very nice write..hugs, g "A tiger who does not prowl becomes a rug..." ;) |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
gee, susanofer, all ya had to do was tell me, don't need santa to get me close! you know, i wanna hear you sing "Santa Baby"... but ya gotta dance too.  this is nice and sweet and even though it rhymes, i like it.  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA I am betting he knows and hears you...  gal...this is beautiful....in sweet whisper |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
just LOVELY! Merry Christmas! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The most amazing thing about you is your unabashed gratitude about all the things in your life. You want what you have, and Sea-sue? That's a beautiful thing. As is this... Merry Christmas, Lovie. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You give me faith that there are some very good marriages and men out there m'friend, as I know you found it Merry Christmas to you all, love from the Canuck eh! |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
What a beautiful Dear Santa letter...almsot the opposite of a Dear John letter. Your love came shining thru this one. Thanks, pictureme2 |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Awww, very heart felt! I can tell you that what ever you say will suffice because it sounds as if you know what is in your heart. This is an excelent piece. I wish you the best, Kristabell |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, this is so beautiful. I am sure he knows. |
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