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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-12-22 05:54 AM


Inveigle me with loves power,
bring kind eyes, thoughtful deed,
gladden my heart as a perfect flower,
quicken love with all due speed.
Tales of the heart speak to me,
fill me with drowsy delight,
clense with love as fresh as the sea,
beam beauty through the stars at night.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-12-22 08:45 AM


Phil, you are filled with the power of love and gladden the hearts of your readers with drowsy delight. Your words are as fresh as the sea and as sweet as the perfect flower.

May all your nights beam as do the stars.

Love & Light,
Linda

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The woods
2 posted 2005-12-22 10:11 PM


Wow, such power and beauty captured within such few words, impressing write, it never paused before the end. Liked your signature too.

Yours truly
~Broken~

"Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away."

Peter Steele

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3 posted 2005-12-22 10:30 PM


This is a beautiful love poem.
thanks for sharing it with us.
Hugs,
Ethel

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-12-22 10:38 PM


I truly enjoyed reading this one outloud. It's both melodic and soothing.

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