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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-12-21 09:09 AM




From the channel's breath
Hoarfrost decorates the trees
Winter's solstice beams
Soft pink and blue horizon
Melts into misty magic



© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-21 09:24 AM


I KNEW this would be beautiful.
I WAS correct.  Love you sweet lady.  Hugs.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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2 posted 2005-12-21 09:27 AM


ahhha, it's like that here the last few mornings....the mist just hangs, as if half frozen but can't fall...then with the sunrise...it's beautiful.
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3 posted 2005-12-21 10:01 AM


succint and truly gorgeous poetry~

~Paz
~babygirL

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4 posted 2005-12-21 10:43 AM


Beautiful write for the Solstice Karilea.
But just think...from here on in the days will start to get longer.
Happy Holidays, Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...     

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5 posted 2005-12-21 11:25 AM


and it's YOUR day to shine, too.




ice
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6 posted 2005-12-21 03:28 PM


A perfect example of the form...

The image is beautiful, the words are graceful....what can I say...

I love it!

That's what...

____________ice
     ><>

Martie
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7 posted 2005-12-21 03:49 PM


Sissie

The sun is shining
the solstice is a warm yard
also a warm heart



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8 posted 2005-12-21 07:14 PM


Perfect.

Eric

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9 posted 2005-12-22 12:22 PM


perfect form that delicately breathed
magic!
thanks for the read, enjoyed it.
pictureme2

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10 posted 2005-12-22 01:52 AM


You helped me to "see".  Thank you.

Helen

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11 posted 2005-12-22 03:09 AM


Very Nice

It looks and feels like a tanka although it
doesn't talk about people. However, I'd
still have to count as one, and a very pretty
one too.

Dale

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


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12 posted 2005-12-22 09:50 AM


Beautiful!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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13 posted 2005-12-22 07:52 PM


Just beautiful.
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14 posted 2005-12-22 09:44 PM


Karilea, a most beauteous penning!

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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15 posted 2005-12-22 09:59 PM


Very, very pretty, Sweet SunshineyOne!!
Huggies,
Ethel

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16 posted 2005-12-24 01:07 AM


True to the magic of winter's horizon! Oh yes!

miscellanea

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