Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
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2005-12-21
09:09 AM
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From the channel's breath Hoarfrost decorates the trees Winter's solstice beams Soft pink and blue horizon Melts into misty magic
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Karilea Rilling Jungel
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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2005-12-21
09:24 AM
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I KNEW this would be beautiful. I WAS correct. Love you sweet lady. Hugs.seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
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2005-12-21
09:27 AM
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ahhha, it's like that here the last few mornings....the mist just hangs, as if half frozen but can't fall...then with the sunrise...it's beautiful.
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babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
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2005-12-21
10:01 AM
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succint and truly gorgeous poetry~
~Paz ~babygirL**Intoxicant to the SouL**
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2005-12-21
10:43 AM
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Beautiful write for the Solstice Karilea. But just think...from here on in the days will start to get longer. Happy Holidays, Nancy~Let peace begin with me...
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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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2005-12-21
11:25 AM
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and it's YOUR day to shine, too.
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ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
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2005-12-21
03:28 PM
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A perfect example of the form...
The image is beautiful, the words are graceful....what can I say...
I love it!
That's what...
____________ice ><>
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
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2005-12-21
03:49 PM
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Sissie
The sun is shining the solstice is a warm yard also a warm heart
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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178
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posted
2005-12-21
07:14 PM
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Perfect.
Eric
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pictureme2
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since 2005-11-13
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2005-12-22
12:22 PM
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perfect form that delicately breathed magic! thanks for the read, enjoyed it. pictureme2
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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
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2005-12-22
01:52 AM
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You helped me to "see". Thank you.
Helen
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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
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posted
2005-12-22
03:09 AM
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Very Nice
It looks and feels like a tanka although it doesn't talk about people. However, I'd still have to count as one, and a very pretty one too.
DaleSpeaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~
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scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
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posted
2005-12-22
09:50 AM
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Beautiful!!!believe in what your heart feels...
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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
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2005-12-22
07:52 PM
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Just beautiful.
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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posted
2005-12-22
09:44 PM
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Karilea, a most beauteous penning!
Love & Sun Light, Linda
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garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
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posted
2005-12-22
09:59 PM
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Very, very pretty, Sweet SunshineyOne!! Huggies, Ethel
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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
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posted
2005-12-24
01:07 AM
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True to the magic of winter's horizon! Oh yes!
miscellanea
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