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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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The faint thirsty hours we have spent caught up with me in mocking voices inaudible phrases and I was in your room last night folding at the waist to be held you saved me in the dark of 5am and eclipsed every sun-held moment of before you. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
I loved those last lines,paul shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This read to me and is written too, like a slip downhill, with a continous climb to reach the top, getting there and realizing you are exactly where you were meant to be. You write this with such elegance: folding at the waist to be held it is pure beauty. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
when the deadnight hours become magical, even the sun must bow |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
 < i'm officially a wuss..shrugs |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Such an exquisite poem, so sensitively expressed as only you can - you deserve those wonderful moments - and a lifetime of them! Thank you for sharing them with us. - Owl |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
you saved me in the dark of 5am and eclipsed every sun-held moment of before you. ~gem oh my god another outstanding write of yours , too good i am jealous ~wolfie  |
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