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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-12-15 11:03 PM



Like puppets themselves
People their shadows
Under silver moon


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
soul drifter
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1 posted 2005-12-16 01:27 AM


Pretty simplicity!

or should I say "airashii"

"The moon ain't romantic, it's intimidating as hell". -- Tom Waits, 'Bad Liver and a Broken Heart'

OwlSA
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2 posted 2005-12-16 01:25 PM


Love the poem!  What do those beautiful Japanese words mean - "Saruwaka-machi" and "airachi"?

- Owl

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2005-12-16 05:12 PM



I love Hiroshige's Ukiyo-e woodblock prints.
Did you know Vincent van Gogh liked them too? Vincent even honored Hiroshige's style in one of his paintings, 'Bridge in the Water.' (of course, you must already know this)
Your poetic style often reminds me of a woodcut ...it has an almost carved or 'stamped' effect. And I really enjoy the way you highlight the ART of poetic styles.
"Evening view of Saruwaka Street" http://www.nga.gov.au/MonetJapan/Detail.cfm?WorkID=J24&ZoomID=3

Huan Yi
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4 posted 2005-12-16 07:36 PM


Owl,

Follow K's link; it's the print
that inspired my thing.

K,

Yes, isn't it odd how something
so simple in execution never the less . . .

Thanks for reading.

John

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2005-12-16 08:35 PM


hehe, as we both know
it only SEEMS simple in execution
the truth is
it's way beyond simple
I am enjoying your artistic interpretations very much, John

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-12-16 08:49 PM


Enjoyed the brevity in this. Well done, well stated.
OwlSA
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7 posted 2005-12-17 02:09 AM


Thanks, I did.

- Owl

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