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Naked Trees
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Naked Trees |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Naked Trees naked trees dance to music’s brittle symphony I watch them in horror as they softly moan and bear bitter witness to the aching twin of my soul I would like to help but my limbs too are frozen vapor speaking where warm words fall crystal for the stirring under my own feet only find crunch winter drifts to places that no warm can touch whispering into silence with the return of an echo water bleeds in ice it truly hurts the flowing no smoke can comfort me and I truly miss the sun just some words cut out |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
kryptonite -majnu |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
but my limbs too are frozen Oh, Helen . . . my sentiments precisely. This was amazing. In me head, Missy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Amazing as ever Helen. Have a wonderful Christmas. hugs, Chris  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful! Eric |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent description! ...but you should be kept warm... *smile* |
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