Open Poetry #36 |
December |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Beneath snow On wooden eaves A woman— watching |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A hauntingly beautiful image! - Owl |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
I agree. Lots of luck, bgj |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Delicate as only you do, John. Thank you. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a pristine beauty in the chill here |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks everyone So much depends on how something is said, apart from words used; it's very hard to capture on paper Glad you like it. Thanks again John |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
third time to mention wooden eaves. why? so impressive! because the swallows?! beautiful. |
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