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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-12-15 10:05 PM

winter has its own sunset
it FEELS different than in summertime
and when it slides down the horizon you want to cry

strolling Alaska winter nights,
I always felt your warm glow
though you did not know

and when the sun reached its high point
I tried so hard to push it higher,
for zenith never was high enough

and if you ever chance to walk an arctic sunset
or stroll underneath midnite's dancing lights
you will understand how my heart felt

until you turned your back to the sunset
and flew away from me that day
never to return

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-15-2005 11:19 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2005-12-15 11:11 PM

I have never seen a sunset as beautiful as the one you speak of nor of the moon, and in that, you are blessed for seeing.

But the other? Oh My . . .

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-12-15 11:20 PM

c'mere sis

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-12-16 12:29 PM

aww you are way too good to me . . . I should be saying that to you!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-12-16 08:54 AM

Kacy this is so very beautiful
but that last line left me

Hugs to you, felt you through your words...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-12-16 10:52 AM

this was touchingly beautiful Kacy
the alaskan nights must be something to see...

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

6 posted 2005-12-16 12:07 PM

Beautiful words about a beautiful land written by a beautiful soul.
bgj

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

7 posted 2005-12-16 12:45 PM

excellent.

i love the way you weave the emotion and imagery.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2005-12-17 08:11 PM

All beautiful souls...the author, the topic and the setting. Hugs Sweetie.
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-12-17 08:26 PM

*hugging you tight*
this reached in and touched my soul.

~Let peace begin with me...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2005-12-17 09:02 PM

you are the best!
each one of your replies is like a hug

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

11 posted 2005-12-17 10:03 PM

An SPKO for sure. Your last words hit like hammer to anvil. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

12 posted 2005-12-17 10:17 PM

Kacy~

This is excellent! The words drew one heck of a picture.

*~Kelly~*

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2005-12-17 10:44 PM

i feel the chill
as the warm colors
turned dark inside
the sky

beauty here kc

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