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Missing The Relationship I Never had
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Missing The Relationship I Never had |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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I think of you, reminders are everywhere, Memories come easily, a warm feeling, flows and ends, with a smile, A cosmic experiance, Haleys comet, flying by, One chance, one lifetime, love so powerful, a shooting rocket, I feel a void, days seem numb, just existing between, Black and white, my world was, is, a still photograph, you brought color, My picture, was forever changed, moving, exciting, After all this time, You are still there, a sacred place, in the silence of my thoughts, Where I go to meet you, in my mind, my heart carries you, Forever we will be, you and I, a connection, unremovable, Our love born, never had the chance, to surrive, unfair circumstances, Sometimes I miss you, I miss the relationship, I never had, but could have. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very Nice ARH!! I like it. I'm sure alot of people can relate to this Rich |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Rich, so nice to see you.... yes I am sure there are alot of "What Ifs" ~ARH  |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
THIS is perfect! So true. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you cloud 9... Hugs ~ARH |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Definately felt this before, well written really enjoyed it |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
oh yeah, i also know the what if's and the wondering of what it would be like in her arms holding each other close under a wintery night sky with a moon barely visible through the falling snow the warm glowing of the heart to heart hug hmmmm lol , maybe if  an awesome write howwwls and (((hugs))) ~wolfie |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, I'm all too familiar with this situation which you've given excellent expression to in your poem. Well done! Helen |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Eloquently done....but there again...what if....?..... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I think "what if's" are a waste of time..if it were meant to be it would have been...someone should have put in more effort. you deserve(d) more."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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