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Open Poetry #36
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sunsetgun
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since 2005-07-17
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0 posted 2005-07-17 05:31 PM


Dusk rides in on
a frigid wind,
as clouds race by
erasing nights sky ,
bolts strike down
with thunderous sound.
Gun-shot rain drops
hammering rooftops
as time stops.
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-07-17 07:26 PM

vivid description here

love this
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-07-17 11:30 PM

Great picture!!
Well done, and welcome to PIP.
ThisDiamond
sunsetgun
Junior Member
since 2005-07-17
Posts 21
3 posted 2005-07-18 10:26 AM

thanks very much.
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