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jinx26
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0 posted 2005-12-14 09:27 PM



This is my first attemp and althought the day weights heavy on my soul, here I go!  

You filled my head after I thought I had Cleared it.                                             With words that were written, Thank God not spoken.                                          We could never be... From the start, it was said.. Written in stone..... and drilled in my head.     Addiction, enjoyment is what we have called it.... Torture is what it does... to my mind, body, and spirit.                                         The clock slows down and the days just seem endless.
But when the last hour is counted, on that day that seems endless......That's when our passion's will be explosive!!!!!!!!!    

[This message has been edited by jinx26 (12-15-2005 12:23 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-12-14 09:34 PM


Welcome to Pip...
such an emotional entrance..

many will relate, I'm sure.

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2 posted 2005-12-14 09:47 PM


You filled my head after I thought I had Cleared it.                                             With words that were written, Thank God not spoken.                                          We could never be... From the start, it was said.. Written in stone..... and drilled in my head.    

  


  ~now this hit me with force , you seem to be in touch with yourself , well written first post and WELCOME TO PIP !!!!!
hope to read more ~wolfie

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-12-14 09:57 PM


Powerful write,
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

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4 posted 2005-12-14 09:59 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Powerful first post.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Hugs & Smiles, Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...  

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5 posted 2005-12-14 10:30 PM


Jinx~

WELCOME to PiP ... settle in a read some dynamic poets~

The circle widens with each new poetic friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

shades of paul
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6 posted 2005-12-14 10:49 PM


Congradulations,very powerful words for your intro,welcome to pip and keep posting....

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

Juju
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7 posted 2005-12-15 01:09 AM


Welcome.  I always enjoy the new comers.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2005-12-15 07:58 AM


I enjoyed very much your well written first post. Truly emotive writing.  I will be looking forward to reading more from you in the future. Welcome to PIP.
Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2005-12-15 08:02 AM


"We could never be... From the start, it was said.. Written in stone..... and drilled in my head"

Loved that!!

Welcome to Pip!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

jinx26
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10 posted 2005-12-15 10:16 AM


Thank you all. I'm speechless! And i have so many more words in my head that it's sometimes hard to put them in order. This is one possitive thing in my life right know Thanks again Jinx
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