Open Poetry #36 |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
This is my first attemp and althought the day weights heavy on my soul, here I go! You filled my head after I thought I had Cleared it. With words that were written, Thank God not spoken. We could never be... From the start, it was said.. Written in stone..... and drilled in my head. Addiction, enjoyment is what we have called it.... Torture is what it does... to my mind, body, and spirit. The clock slows down and the days just seem endless. But when the last hour is counted, on that day that seems endless......That's when our passion's will be explosive!!!!!!!!! [This message has been edited by jinx26 (12-15-2005 12:23 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome to Pip... such an emotional entrance.. many will relate, I'm sure. ![]() |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
You filled my head after I thought I had Cleared it. With words that were written, Thank God not spoken. We could never be... From the start, it was said.. Written in stone..... and drilled in my head. ~now this hit me with force , you seem to be in touch with yourself , well written first post and WELCOME TO PIP !!!!! hope to read more ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Powerful write, Welcome to Passions. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Powerful first post. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. Hugs & Smiles, Nancy ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jinx~ WELCOME to PiP ... settle in a read some dynamic poets~ The circle widens with each new poetic friend~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Congradulations,very powerful words for your intro,welcome to pip and keep posting.... shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Welcome. I always enjoy the new comers. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I enjoyed very much your well written first post. Truly emotive writing. I will be looking forward to reading more from you in the future. Welcome to PIP. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"We could never be... From the start, it was said.. Written in stone..... and drilled in my head" Loved that!! Welcome to Pip!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
Thank you all. I'm speechless! And i have so many more words in my head that it's sometimes hard to put them in order. This is one possitive thing in my life right know Thanks again Jinx |
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