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Tears to Stop
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Tears to Stop |
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goth_chick19 New Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 4Australia |
" Tears to stop " If my tears were to stop falling No longer me here now Cease let go and be Purple at close of my eyes Darkness black my light Angel waiting in the mist Time ticking days lost All of me and my will die When bird takes flight to sun Gone sanity, now begun A smile taken not I hate, face with happiness I cannot be without my one Stuck in time without a gun To bleed Id still not feel If my tears were to stop No longer me here now |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
good expression gchick , it can seem like life is all darkness when you can't be with someone who you desire and want to be with , love can be a dangerous emotion at times it is essential to be happy within yourself without another to co depend on , when you find that place the love will be there, as it is always there - keep writing please  peace ~wolfie |
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goth_chick19 New Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 4Australia |
Thankyou for your reply, although the poem isnt about unrequited love its about the death of a child |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
raw, honest purge. welcome |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
deeply expressed, and emotive. Welcome to Pip. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Interesting Goth_Baby... I read and re-read you, 5-6 times. I hope to see more from you. Welcome to "Passions" INclan |
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