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zenny
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0 posted 2005-11-24 09:19 AM


I can see myself
and you
in a few years from now...
coming home to each other
exactly like we did the past days.

Distant future was reality
for a little while...
Time was a tease
now forcing me
to realise that each future
has it's time
and time has not yet come
for this one.

Thus here I am left alone,
with a veil of patience, longing and hope..
and a good watch
to count the minutes passing by.

© Copyright 2005 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-11-24 09:22 AM


Good to read your words once again zenny!
I do hope that "this time" passes quickly for you. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-11-26 06:38 PM


Insight but it seems

Our of sight

Spot on

On words

dave

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3 posted 2005-11-26 06:47 PM


Hi Kelly...Good to read you again!
Your 'time' will come..much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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4 posted 2005-11-27 07:14 PM


Sweet write !! i love it
~wolfie

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5 posted 2005-12-15 07:51 AM


Time was a tease
now forcing me
to realise that each future
has it's time
Kelly, these lines are amazing.  Very well done. Hugs.

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