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Some people make snow angels
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Some people make snow angels |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Some people make snow angels Sometimes after the snow falls People laugh, slipping in slush Often singing "deck the halls" Some people shovel the snow Early in the evening But I sit in my last class As I look out the window Watching the snow falling And all I can’t think about is -The last day I’ll see you- And it is snowing outside. -Juju- Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exxxxxxxquisite! A non-poet would simply say, "I love you and I'll miss you." You, on the other hand, created a beautiful pathway leading past images of others, all the way up to the pinnacle of your own sensitivity. A masterful example of understatement. - Owl |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you, I am glad you took the time to read my poetry. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Some people shovel the snow Early in the evening But I sit in my last class As I look out the window Watching the snow falling And all I can’t think about is -The last day I’ll see you- And it is snowing outside. JuJ~ woooow, you melted this snowman with this awesome overflow of the heart...whoever he is, he is a lucky guy ... merry christmas and a happy new year too ~wolfie |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
magical words of winter,very nice,well written... shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~awesome~ hugs, Chris  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, this is sweet, Juju!  ....jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aw Juju, could feel you in this one.  Happy holidays sweetie. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for taking the time to reply. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Lovely. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I like it! Thank you for sharing. Ben |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely said..you are a joy to read. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Very Anna A. good John |
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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
I like this a lot, especially the ending. Nice Job. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is a beautiful write, but it seems it stopped too soon. Heartfelt. JL |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
Life going on - Enjoying the snow. Purposefully shoveling the snow. Whilst you just can't get the "miss" out of your mind - the snow falling means something different in this case - I enjoyed this very much! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for all of you replies. I appreciate it alot. |
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Desirer4New Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art |
I love this ! sooo good |
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