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Gods that Bless |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Gods that Bless  Gods that Bless Quick look at righteousness and the ram seems too eagerly displaying some contempt…. as all on the left of right are screaming at or dreaming of the wonder of the light…. Even in shifted darkness, below… still the eyes are to the light… and the ram, now disqualified by the righteous face, below… oh what dreams of winsome make, in take of time and time of wake to see some signs within the sake of all of yesteryear’s remake… and in my eye I see the faces that leave the marks within the traces and unsure this body of all that’s past… still the clouds… are made of last. December 12, 2005 © Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Amazing! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
This seems most religiously framed.....beautiful and full of truth. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"oh what dreams of winsome make, in take of time and time of wake to see some signs within the sake of all of yesteryear’s remake… and in my eye I see the faces that leave the marks within the traces and unsure this body of all that’s past… still the clouds… are made of last." Oh, that's good! This is so uplifting; I'm saving it, Karilea.  .....jo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my, Karilea!! Awesome...all of it!! I am silent in awe and reverence..... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Great blending of words and picture. I can't tell which I like more. Great to read. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you brighten ones mind  My spirit will rise |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
WOW!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A more beautiful poem would be hard to find, to warm the heart on a frozen morning... (two below the knothole, as my locals say) "To every Form of being is assigned... an active Principle:--howe’er removed From sense and observation, it subsists In all things, in all natures; in the stars Of azure heaven, the unenduring clouds.. (Wordsworth-from "The Excursion") Ah yes! Reading Sunshine and Wordsworth, sure does warm up a country boy... I enjoy both.... ____________ice ><> |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Spiritually done in your special dynamic style. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This poem is a beautiful example...they may bless, but unless you've gone celestial on us, that's not the only place blessings come from. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~ awesome ~  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write. And a Merry Christmas to you! JL |
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