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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-12-12 09:14 AM


there is a place in the room of windows
it is a corner with deep woods
and shadows that swallow sin

when you go there alone
with your day dreams
there are books that speak to you

they move to the front of shelves
as they know your soul
and they open their pages

with the pictures you recognize
they are the dreams of your mind
that writhe you in your passions

and after, they blot your skin
and perfume you again
they are the spirits that free you

to run with the wolves in your autumn


______________

dark



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-12-12 09:27 AM



I love the fantasy-feel
of this shiver poem...

delicious!

.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-12-12 09:32 AM


thanks to you ms sun
for letting your eyes touch
where mine have penned

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-12-12 09:34 AM


and I still dream of being a scientist...
metaphisical and electromagnetical phenomenon certainly do inspire...along with a great many other views of nature....dimensions/vortexes...etc.
this was truly done with great depth and imagry, enjoyed, it was a feeling of innocence...yet, a great knowledge.


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-12-12 09:47 AM


ms leej..it is a place we can all go
if we just let ourselves
and if we extend a thread along
in case we ever want to return

thank you for the review ms

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-12-12 11:07 AM


HEY...

sniff sniff

somebody's been...in mah bed!


(well it sounds like my room anyway )


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2005-12-12 11:11 AM


whoops,

busted..but it is a nice room
and you sleep so soundly

thanks lady

Martie
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7 posted 2005-12-12 12:24 PM


DS  I also have such a room....not a bedroom, more a sunroom with wood panneling on one side...and lots and lots of books.  So, I enjoyed this place.  Books... since I learned how to read I've loved them!  
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2005-12-12 12:31 PM


ms martie..lucky books they are,,to wear your eyes. Thanks little neighbor

you and karen did duet deco? (grin)

latearrival
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9 posted 2005-12-12 04:33 PM


Books! Ahh, how most of us have a love affair with pages in a book. Thanks for this one. martyjo
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10 posted 2005-12-12 09:37 PM


pleasing to ones eyes

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

SEA
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11 posted 2005-12-12 09:43 PM


with the pictures you recognize
they are the dreams of your mind
that writhe you in your passions


perfection D


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12 posted 2005-12-13 12:46 PM



Delicate perfection. To journey to such a place-  bliss

~Flawless

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2005-12-13 12:50 PM


late a..thank you for the vision of printed pages

___________

ms g, thank you for those eyes lady


___________

ms seasue, you bless me with your reviews, thanks to you


_____________

flawless one, the journey is heavenly
and the company is so wicked... thank you for your gaze

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