Open Poetry #36 |
Forgotten Hope |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I have onced lived, For this hope to come, And here I see that is gone, The forgotten hope, Of our lives, And stay the hope, As long as we are here Once I the song of a memory, That I hoped to remembered, But it did forgotten the hope, Now all the memory of our life, Wishing it would stay long, Never get us wrong, For the hope we pray, To hear soon from us, The hope we soon pray, To come is still gone, Forgotten hope, Of our life, Let give us the hope for tomorrow The forgotten hope, Let us pray to hope, To come, Forgotten hope, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a song of hope a song of joy enjoyed this, lady Vandana |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice, enjoyed. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
May the living hope of your heart fill your life with love and joy...beautiful writing...*big hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always love to read you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
using the available light pegs the designer...enjoyed this muchly |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Without hope, we all would be lost. Good thoughts! |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I like the play on words with regards to an ironic quality - that is what I beleive anyway. There were a few lines I really enjoyed even better than the others. Well done! Enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice..James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, vandana! I haven't seen you around for awhile. "Let give us the hope for tomorrow The forgotten hope, Let us pray to hope, To come, Forgotten hope," ~ I hope today and all your tomorrows will be filled with love and joy. You deserve it, Dear One. Sending you a big, warm hug, EA |
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