Open Poetry #36 |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
She feels like a poem covered in pearls, lost in a meadow or ocean of furls. Taken down into soft sand by sun wind and sea, glinted by moon light protected by trees. Whistled by gypsies with dancing bare feet, laughed into good humor feeling so sweet. Listen the poem whose cadence is rich, pull thread through her daydream and take the first stitch. -------- reposted with love, for Karilea on her birthday |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you Martie, and hey, it's a good day, Sunshine! Happy Birthday Karilea...such a purty name. ![]() |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Beautiful words and so heartfelt. Happy Birthday, Karilea and, thanks, Martie, for such a loving greeting. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks for reposting such a beauty for a real beauty Martie. HUGS to you both. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
ah, I wish I was one of those that remembered birthdays (on the actual day and not 2 months before or after ![]() this is a beautiful tribute to a wonderful lady |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, You know how much this poem means to me...because it is from you. Thank you so much, Sissie... for everything! ![]() serenity...from my hug to yours... Thanks, Ken! Donna? Bless your heart... Luminosity...hugs to you.... . |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Martie - A lovely poem from one gifted poetess to another and I'm adding my birthday wishes. May the sun always shine on ... Sunshine! Helen |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay! Oh Martie, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, indeed the sun came out to have a peak here in the cloudy northwest today, and I know our Karilea has something to do with it, yay! (does happy dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, and Happy Sun-Shining Birthday, Karilea, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! LOve, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Poet or person, she is beautiful. Thank you for sharing this, Martie -- you're another of this site's treasures. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
What a beautiful gesture and write and you know? Not only did you describe Kari, but you taught me how to pull the sun from the winter sky. |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
"She feels like a poem covered in pearls, lost in a meadow or ocean of furls." A delightful poem. Well done. Lots of luck, bgj ![]() |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie? See what you did to Sue? quote: Now THAT.... is the gift of a true poet....YOU.... ![]() And Suzie? ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martie, you ARE poetry. And yes, she IS sunshine. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kacy? You hit at least ONE of us right on the head! ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a sweet gift of a tribute for our lady!!! Yep, that's her! ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Listen the poem whose cadence is rich, pull thread through her daydream and take the first stitch. yes indeed she is... incredible likeness to... wonderful write Merry Christmas Ladies |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
From one beautiful poetess to another. ![]() m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
nice Martie - really nice - Paul |
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