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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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like a fixed kiss, you held me: and my heart took refuge what a heavy throbbing beat there an ocean of dream, saying yes then no, then no you are the summer you are the sun you are daughter of the heavens and i am the drowned woman rapt in your sea skin a mass of birds flee from me i tremble as i rest on the goblets of your breasts i saw eternity in motion how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more ~Neruda~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
i saw eternity in motion -------------------------- BELLA!! If anyone could see eternity in motion, it truly would be you. How beautiful this is Maree, both poem and your new picture. You truly are magnifico gal. oh...and congratulations on your 10,000th post! Now....do it another ten thousand times PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!  Bellaseek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
OMG.... I love this... Congratulations on your 10,000th post!! (((I am keeping this)))  [This message has been edited by SEA (12-11-2005 12:02 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So...here it is... The 10,000th wonderment... You keep us willing captives, my friend... thank you for giving so freely of your talented emotions... Love, Mom . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I don't know why Maree but this reminded me of being seaweed of sorts, trailing upon the spirit of the waves. Your smile is contagious, beautiful picture! and Congrats on your posting. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A perfectly stunning way to celebrate such a milestone...I love it...**big hugs** |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
... and I see poetry in motion  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG!!! This is SO beautiful!!! And, I love your new pic. Hugging you and smiling back at you. ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Lovely you!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
am the drowned woman rapt in your sea skin glad you went with that line bella, a fantastic play on words. as always, a passionate write  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Like opening gifts at Christmas....each post of yours is a thrill. Congrats on 10,000 !! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
my goddess but you are gorgeous...  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
minchia! manco ho visto che 'post-asti' la nuova foto. mah sei veramente beddazza! mannaggia la miseria, se tu non era sposati, podemo fare il tipo di sesso illigelli nel a menno 50 stati |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
you are the summer you are the sun you are daughter of the heavens and i am the drowned woman rapt in your sea skin beautiful. wonderful write. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
10,000 beauties! Congrats, Maree! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Bella, and YOU are Bellissima. Thank you. Susan, I thank you so much. KARI.."wonderment" not sure, but 10,000...hmm a long time coming heh. Thank you Sunshinygirl. Susie, thank you so much for your lovely reply, the "beautiful" and your congratulations. Startime55, I thank you kindly. Interloper...*smile*..thank you. Nancy, hugging you back. Thank you so much. Martie? and lovely you Bellloooo, thank you always for, well... you know, being you and always being there. Vandan, glad you enjoyed, thank you. Chris, your replies are a joy. Thank you M'lady Serenity... and ty.Bello, 50 stati? allora una volta in ogni stati sole? Mannaggia la gallina. Aiuttoooo! Exhale, thank you sooo much. iliana, you are so sweet. I thank you. m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Raph stole my favorite lines.. Loved this...and love that new picture!! You are gorgeous!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and then there are your eyes that dance with that smile hatless you are brazen and I like your picture to ms D |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderfully expressed |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Beautiful and breathtaking. The words and picture. x |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maree.... when you can get all of the strangers here to dance with you.... then it is the time to acknowledge all of your gifts.... smiling on you... LITTLE ONE....  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Do you know how utterly AWESOME this is?!?!?! |
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