Open Poetry #36 |
It iz I |
Ace33 New Member
since 2005-12-09
Posts 8 |
who put dat smile on ya face wiped tears 4rm ya eye did everything you asked and neva asked why it is I the one who used to be yo only but since you left i've been so lonely everything i do remindin me of you thought what we had was real and true i found out i was wrong and before long you was gone then my caller I.d stopped sayin ya name now i can't get things back the same constantly hangin up on me what is it that i do not see lets put an end to all this cuz you know i'm the one you miss jus give me one wish i'm askin for you kiss and if you feel a spark on yo heart know its me leavin my mark |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really like this, it would flow so much better though if you spelled the words out. Just my opinion.... |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
is this supposed to be in english? -majnu |
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