Open Poetry #36 |
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The aftershock of life (It's Sunday!) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa ![]() |
On the seismograph of love the aftershock of life registers a tremor, shake, throughout immortal lands and on this graph, dot, dot, dot, dot, the heart of all mankind the core and epicenter of this destructive mode. Fine-tuned to overthrow the sinking holes of soul unadulterated energy emerges from the shadows, a force well equipped to fill in the dips and make from rough the smooth. Though I know and though I feel, though I see and can imagine, time takes me to the final end a woman scared of me, an essential contributor of cracks and consternation. So this is me and this is you, earthquakes for the free, and all who wait for peace and grace should know, feel, see, imagine, the shaky ground of other lands … but, excuse me, that’s for then and one crack, two cracks, three, or more, still brings me back as once before. But from the rubble of the “don’t care” I cannot know or feel or see what emerges from the shadows … but, excuse me, I imagine, I can indeed imagine! Helen / 11 December 2005 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sometimes that is all there is...to imagine~~ nicely expressed, Helen M |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It IS very hard to believe that some just won't care... but for those that do? God blesses you. ![]() Lady . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"but, excuse me, I imagine, I can indeed imagine!" ~ Oh, I do believe you can imagine! For you are a poetess with an imagination extraordinaire! ![]() Big hug, Linda |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
the tremors of love shake us all the world over all engulfing love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all for the read. I sometimes wonder what's out there or, indeed, if anything at all. Trouble is that when I do find out, I won't be able to tell anyone. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, Eric. I've missed your words lately. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"So this is me and this is you, earthquakes for the free, and all who wait for peace and grace should know, feel, see, imagine, the shaky ground of other lands … but, excuse me, that’s for then and one crack, two cracks, three, or more, still brings me back as once before." Oh, but I do believe you do see beyond right now. Maybe the cracks bring you back, but it brings you back to a larger version of yourself. Love this poem, Helen. Be well. ![]() |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, no, Jo! Not larger - I'm battling the bulge as it is. ![]() ![]() |
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