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0 posted 2005-12-10 06:26 PM


(Here's our traditional holiday re-post! God Bless You All, and Bill, I hope all is well with you and can't wait for you to come back with a venegeance to troubadour our heartstrings again, yay! )

     

Heavenly Star
By: Noah Eaton & Bill Charles

Look upon the star crowning our tree,
what is it that you see?
In the blink of an eye under His golden manger,
where Mary cradles our loving Saviour?


A star shines down, with its brightness,
my eyes see, as they gaze,
into the heavens, and into His place,
a babe in swaddling clothes, to amaze.


I see eyes that shine with light,
a boy with a tender warm face.
He talks to angels through the night,
comforting His holiness with billows of grace


Eyes of radiance, guiding in the night,
a male child, to smile with His grace.
Soft words spoken, to the halo above,
bathed with her glow, at His birthplace


I see meadows of hands laid before His presence,
murmuring in mirth and praise,
stars, tears, and frankincense,
the greatest love begins to raise


Colors of many hands, to worship one,
many gifts to give, to our king,
all that you have spoken of,
a love of enlightenment, absolving


Yes, I see His love when I glance at this star,
in His unconditional love we are feathered.
This blessing that shall never mar,
protecting us from every storm we’ve weathered


I see a love also Noah, from this heavenly star,
unconditional, as you have written,
and a blessing, to be for always,
knowing, He will never abandon...

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"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2005-12-10 08:36 PM


"I see meadows of hands laid before His presence,
murmuring in mirth and praise,
stars, tears, and frankincense,
the greatest love begins to raise

Colors of many hands, to worship one,
many gifts to give, to our king,
all that you have spoken of,
a love of enlightenment, absolving"


this is really beautiful Noah and Bill...I don't think I read it the first time, so I'm glad I got to tonight!

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2 posted 2005-12-10 09:02 PM


Awww...hugging you in my heart Noah.
This is a perfectly lovely duet.
I miss Bill too. *sigh*
Your friend, Chris

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3 posted 2005-12-11 09:32 AM


Noah I think I missed this the first time out.  Glad I didn't miss it this time!
Thank you my good and kind friend

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2005-12-11 09:35 AM


oh this is beautiful sweet Noah...
I too miss Bill and wish him well.
Hugging you both tight.

~Let peace begin with me...  

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5 posted 2005-12-11 12:30 PM


nice read you two
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6 posted 2005-12-11 01:03 PM



You two duet well together! Gosh, this just makes me miss Bill even more!

As the legendary Lawrence Welk used to say, "Wunnerful, wunnerful, wunnerful!"

Sending a warm Christmas hug to each of you!

Linda
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7 posted 2005-12-12 03:36 AM


I do love it when you and Bill duet. You
are both wonderful poets and together it is
doubly wonderful!!! I miss him too. He writes
such beautiful romantic poems, too. Thanks
for reposting this beautiful poem of yours
and Bill's. I loved it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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8 posted 2005-12-12 11:07 AM


Always a great Repost!!

to you both.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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9 posted 2005-12-13 11:07 PM


Enjoyed...James
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10 posted 2005-12-14 08:40 AM


happy to see this again...warmth envelopes the reader...by the way, Noah, where is Bill, come to think of it, I haven't seen him post in a long long time?

thank you dear for sharing this again...perfect duet....

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