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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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significant number before dinner plates rare breed arrives late someone else anticipates arrivals with bags decorated frills presents within someone has come lights have dimmed infrequently table of life eat while able members sit dine,chat who can find lips to kiss someone else all infrequent all amiss the brochettes praised for tenderness wine served elegantly festive season begins significant number meet infrequently holiday greeted periodically... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-10-2005 08:57 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well understood, Martin! Know what you mean. Well said!  ....jo |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
great. each stanza seemed to tumble out of the first line. it was great to read out loud. -majnu |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I haven't read you in a while, and i just realised that i have missed your words. Loved these scenes, the sentiment, the fleeting moments.  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the "once a year to meet and exchange pleasantries" is coming soon...once better than none |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This rounds the year and wraps it with a bow, Martin... as always, it pleases me to read your thoughts... . |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I know just what you mean...though rare a meeting still cherished for the chance to get together...Well said...*big hugs* |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
bump. |
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