Open Poetry #36 |
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Pancake Man |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The sweetest man I ever knew Early riser with morning dew Heats the tea, mixes pancake goop Whispers in the morning Still love you The aroma of the bacon And his pancake makins Bring me from pillow Rise He opens the daylight, Opens warmth Opens it with child-like eyes. At times I feel inadequate To give him all he gives This man is a man of love In everything he lives. [This message has been edited by miscellanea (12-09-2005 09:47 PM).] |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sounds to be a very special relationship. Pancakes.....yes, back in the days, long long ago...we always went each year to the coliseum of our town....the JayCees always had a big pancake feast...I can still smell the bacon, see the light, fluffy perfectly brown pancakes....covered generously with Maple syrup...and always a large glass of cold milk to go with it....Perfect!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Magnus, Yes, it is a special relationship--my husband, my best friend. I wish I could do as much for him. Among my fondest pancake memories were the ones created by my dad when he used to make animal shapes in the batter to brighten our mornings. Thanks for commenting, Magnus. It is good to hear from you. miscellanea |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Miscellanea~ You stirred up a batch of memories witht this one~ I'm sure he thinks you are worth every effort he makes~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank you for your kind reply, Marge. I'm glad it stirred up memories for you. I hope they were very good ones! Great to hear from you again! miscellanea |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
One secret of a good relationship is that one never feels they do enough for the other. It sounds like you've found that secret. (PS. Once in college, I only had pancake flour for food and ate them for about 6 weeks. It was some years before I could touch one again. Thanks for that memory....I think? Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I've heard of living on love, on popcorn, but never pancakes. Blue berry syrup might entice the desire? Good luck on the pancake dilemma! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so lovely... both the poem... and the relationship it describes. *S* |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
ah, this made me smile. Pancakes aren't my favourites, but the sweet sentiment in this is lovely. ![]() |
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