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So Stupid |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
So Stupid Stars won’t show us the right way if we continue to explore them Doors won’t open up if we slaughter their handles Men won’t walk if we stop manufacturing brown sandals Pigeons don’t fly to make peace, they live like us But they surly don’t kill themselves with plastic rifles or real guns Bitter olives won’t become sweet War survivors won’t say they want to retreat Brave people won’t share their feelings, they think they’re tough But when a cat climbs upon a tree, they afraid they’ll muff Buttered enemies won’t fight a pot Two football players won’t struggle for the main spot Just kidding, utopian team Except the manager no one knows how to swim Faults won’t occur if we don’t make mistakes Don’t butcher cows, human beings don’t need stakes If only we were cowards, no one would’ve died If we voyaged to a parallel world, maybe we could see the other good side Moons won’t light earth if we say we can reach them and play their role We offend nature when we travel through space, which always wants to be in control Gypsies won’t flute if we haunt them like witches Criminals won’t escape If they don’t look suspicious Peace won’t call us if we forever say no Children won’t be adults if parents don’t let them grow Hunger won’t spread if we give something from ourselves Religious people go to church just to hear the ringing bells Give me your card, I’ll sign behind How could I be so stupid and be a part of the human kind. |
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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
welcome to the site. This poem was pretty good, I especially liked "Doors won’t open up if we slaughter their handles Men won’t walk if we stop manufacturing brown sandals " great way to word it, keep on writing. thank you |
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