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Fighting Temptation
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Fighting Temptation |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA 
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I posted this once before but changed some of it.. I like this version much better As the day comes to an end I find myself wondering where I stand I know the time is now I just don't know where or how Should I run for a place that may not exist Or hold out for what, just is Is it being safe, fighting temptation Or is a tempting taste a wonderous embrace I sometimes feel my life has been written and the pages all seem full But now I feel like lifes spinning Down Alice's endless Rabbit hole It's a feeling like no other To be loved for who we are To have someone believe in us Like wishing on a star Is it fair to risk our pleasures On someone who has no clue Especially when another comes along that makes your heart skip a beat or two So what to do, What to do Should I risk of losing it all what seems safe in my eyes Or should I take a bite from the tree of life Do you think that It'd be right Romance is wonderous Love is too Passion enflames my soul Whenever I think of you! Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
I did not see the first version but I did enjoy this version! Alot of questions, a thinking, loving write. thanks for sharing, pictureme2 |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I say you only live once...and to be happy and loved is what matters... ~ARh |
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