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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-08 08:06 AM



what is the distance between day dreams
and lovers
when they make the sky their skin
and the sun their hands

how close is a perhaps tomorrow
or a maybe evening
when heartbeats make the music
that moves them instrumental

shall we pretend to be the rivers
that connect under the ground
with our secret spoken currents
or the oceans that meld in mating

shall we be the winds that fury storms
and breeze them helpless bound
til they are forgiven by the gods
and blessed as one with thunder

and as we dream how close is our love

_____________
daark

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-12-08 08:10 AM


consider me collapsed    

oh dark, you sir,
have just outdone yourself
and I did not think
that to be possible....

big hugs, Dark one...


strange how a laugh looks like crying without the tears {queensryche}

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-12-08 08:33 AM


it is as close as we believe...of faith is what you speak...in the depth of the most treasured gift, lay the eyes to the heart and the essense of what you feel...

and they call me deep?  Your a tremendous philosopher, with river verbage constantly flowing

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2005-12-08 08:43 AM


a perhaps tomorrow and a maybe evening and an always song

- Owl

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2005-12-08 08:46 AM


Oops!  Forgot to click on library.

- Owl

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2005-12-08 11:12 AM


what is the distance between day dreams
and lovers
when they make the sky their skin
and the sun their hands

how close is a perhaps tomorrow
or a maybe evening
when heartbeats make the music
that moves them instrumental

shall we pretend to be the rivers
that connect under the ground
with our secret spoken currents
or the oceans that meld in mating

shall we be the winds that fury storms
and breeze them helpless bound
til they are forgiven by the gods
and blessed as one with thunder

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

my oh my...just look at you glow...
oh how I love when you write like this...
AND ...
Oh how I wish I had wrote this.

when heartbeats make the music
that moves them instrumental


pardon me whilst I swooooon  

awesome write D

Thru the water...thru the rain
To the soul of everything
Throw my heart out on the stones
And I'm almost gone

D.Gray

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
6 posted 2005-12-08 11:22 AM


Thank you JM for bringing this back up...

Mr. D, this is one of your finest.  



"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-12-08 11:40 AM


If you haven't ever before
written such a nature-ly perfect poem...

you have, now...

Those underground streams...
they sure have something going on...



.

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
8 posted 2005-12-08 12:05 PM


DS

Sometimes I can hear them under my back yard....I know they're there, the rivers passing, pulled by gravity through underground chambers, to the sea.  Thank you for this beautiful metaphor that reminded me to listen.  

MGROVES
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Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
9 posted 2005-12-11 08:01 AM


enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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