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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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what is the distance between day dreams and lovers when they make the sky their skin and the sun their hands how close is a perhaps tomorrow or a maybe evening when heartbeats make the music that moves them instrumental shall we pretend to be the rivers that connect under the ground with our secret spoken currents or the oceans that meld in mating shall we be the winds that fury storms and breeze them helpless bound til they are forgiven by the gods and blessed as one with thunder and as we dream how close is our love _____________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
consider me collapsed  oh dark, you sir, have just outdone yourself and I did not think that to be possible.... big hugs, Dark one... strange how a laugh looks like crying without the tears {queensryche} |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is as close as we believe...of faith is what you speak...in the depth of the most treasured gift, lay the eyes to the heart and the essense of what you feel... and they call me deep? Your a tremendous philosopher, with river verbage constantly flowing |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
a perhaps tomorrow and a maybe evening and an always song - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oops! Forgot to click on library. - Owl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what is the distance between day dreams and lovers when they make the sky their skin and the sun their hands how close is a perhaps tomorrow or a maybe evening when heartbeats make the music that moves them instrumental shall we pretend to be the rivers that connect under the ground with our secret spoken currents or the oceans that meld in mating shall we be the winds that fury storms and breeze them helpless bound til they are forgiven by the gods and blessed as one with thunder ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ my oh my...just look at you glow... oh how I love when you write like this... AND ... Oh how I wish I had wrote this. when heartbeats make the music that moves them instrumental pardon me whilst I swooooon awesome write D  Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you JM for bringing this back up... Mr. D, this is one of your finest.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you haven't ever before written such a nature-ly perfect poem... you have, now... Those underground streams... they sure have something going on...  . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Sometimes I can hear them under my back yard....I know they're there, the rivers passing, pulled by gravity through underground chambers, to the sea. Thank you for this beautiful metaphor that reminded me to listen.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed  My spirit will rise |
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