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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you took me on a tour you said with my eyes widefolded blind you let me touch your boundaries that you said were still fragile and I knew you were nervous with your treasured gifts being a bandit by reputation and so close to your broken locks but those windows were partly open and you said my thrill was always welcome if I were bold enough and a bit naughty too you would be pleased to be trespassed and to be danced in a day dreamer's garden _____________ daark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Quite a dance, enjoyed the read. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you write as one peering, enfolded within a sheer curtain . . . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"you took me on a tour you said with my eyes widefolded blind you let me touch your boundaries that you said were still fragile and I knew you were nervous with your treasured gifts" Loved the title! and I always love the boundaries you so expertly walk.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wise woman... not to fix her locks. Not when the gardener is so clever with the soil... . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
...the dance of the seven butterflies ... beautiful! - Owl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a most delightful boquet you gift us with! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
missed reading you My spirit will rise |
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