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0 posted 2005-12-07 03:44 PM



it was in your smile
my long lost Christmas present
a gift left in wrap
curled red satin ribbon lips
sweet bounty of the season
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Chris Barker
December 2005
~~~~~


© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-07 04:02 PM


Adorable! I'm all puckered up just thinking of such beauteous, scarlet-ribboned bounty!


Linda

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2 posted 2005-12-07 04:18 PM



Beautiful Tanka Chris!!!
Really enjoyed this one!
Back to wrapping your gifts. heh heh.
Love ya and miss ya!

~Let peace begin with me...  

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3 posted 2005-12-07 04:25 PM


Thankyou lovely Linda! Hugs!

Nancy Lee - glad you liked this.
Now.... what did you get me?!!

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4 posted 2005-12-07 09:36 PM


A wonderfully festive write Chris.  Much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2005-12-07 09:41 PM


Wonderful write!  ;
Hope to see at Christmas time (Rick too)

The spotlight can only get brighter.

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6 posted 2005-12-07 10:59 PM


Nightshade,
What a lovely write.
Really enjoyed reading this and perfect form that left me smiling.
pictureme2

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7 posted 2005-12-07 11:05 PM


scorpio - thankyou my friend & hugs!

Chris - hope to see you then too & thanks!! Hugs!

picture - thankyou for reading and commenting. Hugs!

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8 posted 2005-12-08 12:27 PM


Ummmmm......yummy one, Chris!  Enjoy the season!   ...jo
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9 posted 2005-12-08 02:15 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this made me swoon, envisioning the day I truly get this present which I have been longing for for eight years, yay! (sigh) This is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish for this present to forever bring happiness to your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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10 posted 2005-12-08 10:00 AM


jo & Noah, thankyou both and big hugs!!
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11 posted 2005-12-09 11:14 AM


Warm and Christmassy!  I loved it.

- Owl

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12 posted 2005-12-09 12:12 PM


Very sweet Chris.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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13 posted 2005-12-09 12:18 PM


Thankyou Owl & Susan. hugs!
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14 posted 2005-12-09 01:16 PM


Oh yes...I love this one...It sings to the heart....**big hugs**
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15 posted 2005-12-09 02:02 PM


Hello Startime & thankyou !!
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How good you have gotten at these!
I think I am getting jealous

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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17 posted 2005-12-10 01:42 PM


A beautiful vision that could be felt...I love the romance and beauty it makes me feel...*big hugs*
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18 posted 2005-12-10 01:43 PM


A gift left in wrap....

~*~

Only YOU could do that!

So much promise in these weightless kisses!



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19 posted 2005-12-10 03:45 PM


Interloper! You're back ... again.
Thankyou so much for taking the time to read and respond. Big Hugs!!

Startime - I am so glad that you enjoyed.
Hugs!

Karilea - Holiday Hugs & thanks dear lady!


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20 posted 2005-12-10 06:21 PM


Lovely...James
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21 posted 2005-12-10 06:26 PM


Sounds like the EggNog is spiced up a bit!

Merry Christmas to you Chris and family.

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22 posted 2005-12-10 08:56 PM


James & Magnus - thankyou dear poets. Hugs!
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23 posted 2005-12-11 09:26 AM


Nightshade,
   I can picture those curling lips!  This is precious!  A very enjoyable read!
       miscellanea

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Hugs and thanks misc.!!
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