Open Poetry #36 |
The bars of believe |
luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
The bars of believe I believe that if today is not easy then I believe that change is good and necessary I believe that either in this life or the next I believe in a virgin born Son I believe that happily ever after is real, Through the bars of believe a willing prisoner of hope |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Okay, so maybe I don't believe exactly as you..but this was really nice and I enjoyed it. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We can always believe in the beauty of another's belief... and that you have shared this with us... really shows us how you shine through everything. warm . |
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Danie Franklin Member
since 2005-12-05
Posts 68 |
You know that just screams to be printed and put up on my wall to give my son inspiration for him to make it through all his days. Its really a wonderfully worded and told poem. great job. Danie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your username suits you! ~ and I believe that your way to Eternity is paved with Light! A lovely and luminous piece of writing! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful... and I believe too.. I believe in the sun even when it's not shining. I believe in love even when not feeling it. I believe in God ...even when He is silent Smiles & Hugs, Nancy ~Let peace begin with me... |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
*big smile* oh I am so glad I was given this to write, it lifts my heart as it lifts yours....thank you all so much |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've watched you grow in grace and goodness... so I know your beliefs are more than words... they're actions. *S* Here's to brand new tomorrows... with hopes of better. *S* Excellent write! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Luminosity~ This is such a beautiful penning~ 'I believe that change is good and necessary that God is working on me and through me and ten years from now will find me not just older, but better, increased in Grace and goodness' What lovely thoughts to share ... thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
suthern, thank you so much...it is partly because of your faith in me that the goodness has had a chance to grow marge, thank you |
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