Open Poetry #36 |
Sands of Time |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sands of Time I entered life with cry and lurch And there I started on my search It took a while for me to see And even know that here I be For when I started on my path My mind was placed within a bath The residue of past was gone And I was new and freshly born The spirit of the drive was there Deep inside my soul somewhere And I was pushed and prod to find To add a little more this rind To circle in this phantoms mode To touch upon a higher code To pierce once more the needles eye To add a little more of I So here I be this egos grime To once more sift the sands of time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
To circle in this phantoms mode To touch upon a higher code To pierce once more the needles eye To add a little more of I yep. I needed to read this one this morning sir Sey... thanks guy. Lovely write, as always. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done Sir! I for one am glad of the mind bath...the way this life is going I must have been very, very bad the last one... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Sy, have missed you and your words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"To circle in this phantoms mode To touch upon a higher code To pierce once more the needles eye To add a little more of I So here I be this egos grime To once more sift the sands of time" Aha! I found you Sy! And just in time to enjoy this wonderful piece. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I love the unique perspective of this write Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit You are indeed a gentle spirit. Susan You know I felt the same way. littlewing Missed you too. Nancy I miss you when you are not here. scorpio And I love your comments. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and..you sift them well Sir Sy...very well indeed. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sheesh just imagine, we will one day all be a new improved version You are not only funny but you do it with such a flair for the truth. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Barry. Sharon Nothing wrong with a little humor. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy is still the guy! Yes sir it's always a pleasure to read your mind. I mean writing. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C A pleasure to have you read me, thank you guy. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
But what a sweet ego that be! I just adore this write, Sy....right in line with my thinking, too. ......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana You never fail me. Thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ how do you do it! Your brilliance, dulls not! May your sands sift forever more! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel YOU ARE THE SWEETIEST ANGEL I KNOW. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Keep shifting those sands of time for the treasures buried therein are priceless beyond compare....I love this poem...**big hugs** [This message has been edited by Startime55 (12-09-2005 02:18 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words are especially meaningful ~ for I suspect that you are surrounded by a host of members from the angelic realm! ~ May your day be one of joy and inner peace. Love & Light, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thanks for the hug and like. Earth Angel How can you thank an Angel? |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Seymour, Just as I remembered: the man of golden poetry! It is so good to once again read your words! miscellanea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miscellanea I missed you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i have missed you My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES I have missed you too. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
may you be blessed this xmas season, with more than the spirits that quide you , angels that watch over you. My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES And may you be the same. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou, you are a true blessing My spirit will rise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want some of that bath water!!!! LOL Lovely write, my friend... your words sift gently into my thoughts and make my day better. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES I consider you a blessing too. suthern Anything to help you and your day. |
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