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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-12-06 05:57 PM




Kiss Her Goodbye


You pulled her close

because she wanted

to be close,

and you wanted that too.

But now that she

wants to pull away,

stand not in her way,

kiss her goodbye.


JamesLee
December06
2005
Rejection Series
5 of 8



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Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
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1 posted 2005-12-06 10:32 PM


James~

Love reading your stuff. This one is no exception. Keep'em comin'.

*~Kelly~*

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-12-06 10:40 PM


Oh dear..sounds like trouble brewin'.
Hugs sweet James.

~Let peace begin with me...  

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-12-09 10:46 PM


Thank you Hockeychick and Enchantress for the nice responses...
This is just a series of my thoughts on rejection...some old and some new...
Not about me and my girlfriend...she's away right now visiting her parents...she's having a White Christmas...James

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