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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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a leather scent of dreams hurried my stallion there to the edge of the spirits place my eyes walked the wishing windows my hands wrote poems on a lover's sky the tree people whispered behind me there was laughter in the deep water the river spoke of your sighs and of the gods that reached for them and touched your lips with smile songs I was a stone waiting to speak your name was on my mouth like the northern moss the earth joined me in praying that you would soon journey there to the edge of my kingdom that you would bring the morning and that your eyes would be searching for the penspeak of my psalms that you would wear them as armor that you would worship me with your arrows ________________ daark |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my eyes walked the wishing windows my hands wrote poems on a lover's sky the tree people whispered behind me there was laughter in the deep water the river spoke of your sighs and of the gods that reached for them and touched your lips with smile songs I was a stone waiting to speak your name was on my mouth like the northern moss the earth joined me in praying that you would soon journey there to the edge of my kingdom that you would bring the morning and that your eyes would be searching for the penspeak of my psalms ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ have mercy on the moths D-dude  such an awesome write groovy guy... I love the alliterations and assonance you whispered in this scarlet-sigh. Your penspeak is always a treat for the senses.  Thru the water...thru the rain To the soul of everything Throw my heart out on the stones And I'm almost gone D.Gray |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I would have loved to experience this with you...miraculous!!! This give to me, it's own meaning, and yours....a lovely window to partake such light! Outstanding Morning D.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If there was ever a poem for a Sagittarian... this is it... thank you for the gift, Sir. . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
my eyes walked the wishing windows my hands wrote poems on a lover's sky ...love when you write like this M |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
~and that your eyes would be searching for the penspeak of my psalms that you would wear them as armor that you would worship me with your arrows~  wow. library. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"the tree people whispered behind me there was laughter in the deep water the river spoke of your sighs and of the gods that reached for them and touched your lips with smile songs" You sing a beautiful spirit's song, my friend! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ My sweet MartieSis beat me to it ... but, that's A-Okay ... I fully agree with her~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I believe I already said something about when you let your spirit pen speak... yep, tis a wondermous thing when it happens... do it.. again. seek the flame within yourself |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A love poem with the richness of sunrise, to wrap around one's shoulders and ease them of their burdens. Exquisite, Dark Stranger. - Owl |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
soulfull  My spirit will rise |
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