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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-06 07:27 AM


a leather scent of dreams
hurried my stallion there
to the edge of the spirits place
my eyes walked the wishing windows
my hands wrote poems on a lover's sky

the tree people whispered behind me
there was laughter in the deep water
the river spoke of your sighs
and of the gods that reached for them
and touched your lips with smile songs

I was a stone waiting to speak
your name was on my mouth
like the northern moss
the earth joined me in praying
that you would soon journey there

to the edge of my kingdom
that you would bring the morning
and that your eyes would be searching
for the penspeak of my psalms
that you would wear them as armor

that you would worship me with your arrows

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Janet Marie
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Posts 18554

1 posted 2005-12-06 07:51 AM


my eyes walked the wishing windows
my hands wrote poems on a lover's sky

the tree people whispered behind me
there was laughter in the deep water
the river spoke of your sighs
and of the gods that reached for them
and touched your lips with smile songs

I was a stone waiting to speak
your name was on my mouth
like the northern moss
the earth joined me in praying
that you would soon journey there

to the edge of my kingdom
that you would bring the morning
and that your eyes would be searching
for the penspeak of my psalms

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

have mercy on the moths D-dude  
such an awesome write groovy guy...
I love the alliterations and assonance you whispered in this scarlet-sigh.
Your penspeak is always a treat for the senses.


Thru the water...thru the rain
To the soul of everything
Throw my heart out on the stones
And I'm almost gone

D.Gray

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-12-06 08:11 AM


I would have loved to experience this with you...miraculous!!! This give to me, it's own meaning, and yours....a lovely window to partake such light!  Outstanding

Morning D.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-12-06 08:12 AM



If there was ever a poem
for a Sagittarian...

this is it...

thank you for the gift, Sir.

.


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-12-06 09:28 AM


my eyes walked the wishing windows
my hands wrote poems on a lover's sky


...love when you write like this

M

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
5 posted 2005-12-06 09:56 AM


~and that your eyes would be searching
for the penspeak of my psalms
that you would wear them as armor

that you would worship me with your arrows~



wow. library.

Martie
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Posts 28049
California
6 posted 2005-12-06 10:56 AM


"the tree people whispered behind me
there was laughter in the deep water
the river spoke of your sighs
and of the gods that reached for them
and touched your lips with smile songs"

You sing a beautiful spirit's song, my friend!  


Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2005-12-06 01:13 PM


Dark~
My sweet MartieSis beat me to it ... but, that's A-Okay ... I fully agree with her~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-12-06 02:20 PM


I believe I already said something about when you let your spirit pen speak...

yep, tis a wondermous thing when it happens...


do it..
again.  

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
9 posted 2005-12-06 04:53 PM


A love poem with the richness of sunrise, to wrap around one's shoulders and ease them of their burdens.  Exquisite, Dark Stranger.

- Owl

MGROVES
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Posts 3802
california
10 posted 2005-12-18 04:36 AM


soulfull

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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