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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-12-05 05:14 PM



Whisper me into your night dreams,
let my sweet scent surround you
as you wrap yourself around
the soothing sounds
of all your yesterday’s
finest love memories.

And when you awaken
~refreshed~
remember me,
with your softest smile,
and a gentle kiss,
whispering my name

~Love~

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-12-05 05:30 PM


Wow, Kacy!!  This looks good on you!  
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2 posted 2005-12-05 05:36 PM


thanks for that sweet reply, Martie!
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3 posted 2005-12-06 09:18 AM


God, thats beautiful . . .  I want that.
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4 posted 2005-12-06 10:05 AM


Refreshed~ yes, that feeling. Love this tenderness kacy.

always good to read you, even if i dont always reply, i am reading.  


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5 posted 2005-12-06 10:07 AM


Kacy~
Oh ... this one likes me muchly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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6 posted 2005-12-06 10:11 AM


~ and written in pink for that added touch of romance! Roses

Loverly!


Linda

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7 posted 2005-12-06 11:35 AM


Wow....what a gift you give, Kacy.  This is terrific.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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8 posted 2005-12-06 01:44 PM


Enjoyed this. Very sweetly done. Lots of luck,
bgj

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9 posted 2005-12-06 03:57 PM


a thank you kiss to each of you
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10 posted 2005-12-07 12:04 PM


A soft tender, sweet romantic write!
Enjoyed,
pictureme2

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11 posted 2005-12-07 03:23 AM


nice. but i really do not see why you need the squigglies to set off refreshed; you do an excellent job building it to that point of inflection.

-majnu
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12 posted 2005-12-07 03:26 AM



So beautiful, Kacy...

Love this...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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13 posted 2005-12-07 08:42 AM


Enjoyed the read here kacy...a fine gentle write...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Susan Caldwell
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14 posted 2005-12-07 09:46 AM


"whisper my name..."

I often wonder if in this life time I have left someone whispering my name.

I like to hope that I have and maybe, they do so with a smile.

  very much enjoyed Kacy.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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15 posted 2005-12-07 10:59 AM


Oh Kacy, I LOVE this....which I'm sure
doesn't surprise you? Those ~whispers~
speak volumes, don't they?
Huggies,
Ethel

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16 posted 2005-12-08 10:28 AM


thanks to each of you

majnu? so good to see you here again! you are right, I've gotten carried away with those pretty squigglies lately LOL

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