Open Poetry #36 |
Shambals Shield |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shambals Shield Shielded by Shambals attire I walked a path of my desire Picking flowers on the way Those that faced the sun that day And with each flower of admire I wove a necklace of desire Hanging them, round shoulders bare And faced the mirror with my wear And in the mirror shadows form Behind the core of thunder storm Lighting flashed the dark beyond The festers of the old respond And in the white of light I stood Reaching for the rainbows hood Mixing dew to wet each hew Sown into a sky of blue And though I sway the center core I could not stay the evermore |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And in the mirror shadows form Behind the core of thunder storm Lighting flashed the dark beyond The festers of the old respond And in the white of light I stood Reaching for the rainbows hood Mixing dew to wet each hew Sown into a sky of blue ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My oh my this place is sloooow today... but Im so glad I popped in and found this gem of pen from you.... the verses I highlighted above are poetic gold me groovy Sy-guy.... the rainbows hood and ya get extra winkies for that metaphor and personifi!! :kiss) *ww* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jm, Wonderful to see you here. I hope you are feeling better. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Sy! I know I'm late today... but, it's never too late to enjoy one of your poems. Hugs & Smiles, Nancy ~Let peace begin with me... |
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