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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-12-04 10:36 AM


Shambals Shield

Shielded by Shambals attire
I walked a path of my desire
Picking flowers on the way
Those that faced the sun that day

And with each flower of admire
I wove a necklace of desire
Hanging them, round shoulders bare
And faced the mirror with my wear

And in the mirror shadows form
Behind the core of thunder storm
Lighting flashed the dark beyond
The festers of the old respond

And in the white of light I stood
Reaching for the rainbows hood
Mixing dew to wet each hew
Sown into a sky of blue

And though I sway the center core
I could not stay the evermore


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2005-12-04 05:00 PM


And in the mirror shadows form
Behind the core of thunder storm
Lighting flashed the dark beyond
The festers of the old respond

And in the white of light I stood
Reaching for the rainbows hood
Mixing dew to wet each hew
Sown into a sky of blue

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My oh my this place is sloooow today...
but Im so glad I popped in and found this gem of pen from you....
the verses I highlighted above are poetic gold me groovy Sy-guy....

the rainbows hood

and ya get extra winkies for that metaphor and personifi!!     :kiss)

*ww*




Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-12-04 05:55 PM


Jm,
Wonderful to see you here. I hope you are feeling better.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-12-04 08:30 PM


Wonderful write Sy!
I know I'm late today...
but, it's never too late to enjoy one of your poems.
Hugs & Smiles, Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

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