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Open Poetry #36

distant feelings

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-12-02 01:51 AM

hallowed eyes broken heart
where do i even begin to start
take my breath

don't bother to see or say things
twice friendship is important to us
so why does that have to be the end
for us

my heart aches my eyes are distant
no more then a peremedent vacation
from emotions of the mind

perhaps one day ill go back to
my cheer state and feel the things
i felt again sometime

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

1 posted 2005-12-02 02:56 AM

It gets better, trust me

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-12-02 05:38 PM

Nice writing...it gets better as you let go...the problem is coming to the place where you want to let go...James

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